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正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
A number of students lose their confidence to study English. I don't know why they lose their confidence. Maybe English is too difficult to learn. But we need to study English. That's very important of us. English was spoken all over the world. If we can speak English very well, we can go abroad for travelling and it is good to talk with someone. We can work on English to earn money. We can understand foreigner what is he saying. In general, if we don't learn English we wil regret. Let me tell you how to learn English. First, we can listen to English music or see the film. Second, reading more English books. Third, not only read more but also write something. Forth, we must be speaking English every day. Finally, we aren't interested in English, so we have tried to like it. Let's improve our English. We can do it.
