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5.意义：保护环境
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October 28, 2012 Sunday Sunny
Today I am very excited because I did a lot of things with my teachers and classmates to protect our environment._________________________________________________________
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October 28, 2012 Sunday Sunny Today I am very excited because I did a lot of things with my teachers and classmates to protect our environment. We were at a.m.8:00 before p.m.5:00. We were going to the Zhon shan park. On the park put on rubbish that we were thinking protect the environment.
