文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
Nowadays,we are always rely on digital machines in this "Digtal Age".Everyday,we just watch our mobile phones or computers so that we miss something more important than these.For example,when we were having a dinner together with our family on weekend.We were prefer to talk with someone who are stranged than have a small talking with our parents. Time is cheap than everything else but when you need it that even if you are a billionare ,you can not buy it .So,time is money.We should have a proper way to use our time.Don`t be a slaver to your digital machines.