2007年12月英语六级作文真题:Digital Age

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意。

Nowadays，we always rely on digital machines in this "Digtal Age".Every day,we just watch our mobile phones or computers so that we loss something more important than these.For example,when we were having dinner together with our family on weekend.We prefer to talk with someone who are stranged than have a small talking with our parents. Time is cheaper than anything else but when you need it that even if you are a billionare ,you can not buy it.So,time is money.We should have a proper way to use our time.Don`t be a slaver to your digital machines.