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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下。

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I agree with the statement that snap judgement can never be trusted in general conditions, but in some specific conditions, snap judgement made by experienced people is necessary and should be trusted. Snap judgements are judgements that made in a short time. For a rational man, a snap judgement should be avoided because it contains so much emotional elements that lack eccential reason. For example, we shouldn't judge a person only by his/her first appearance. Our stereotype thinking pattens will lead many mistakes to our judgements and affect our final decision. In general, we snap judgement is unreliable and should not be trusted. But in some specific conditions, snap judgements are very necessary. For example, when police are looking for criminals, especially when the police don't know what they look like. A snap judgement based on the behavior of common people made by experienced policemen is very helpful to catch potential criminals. And it is the same in a candidat's view of a company, since they do not have enough time to acknowledge a person. It is very important to learn how to make correct snap judgement. So, among these judgements, experienced snap judgement would be trusted to make important decisions in a short period. So, in general conditions, snap judgement is harmful and should not be trusted. When we have to make judgements in a short time, the snap judgements made by experienced specialists would be an important standard for making decisions and should be trusted.

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