文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。
Nowadays we re living in a world of information explosion.We can get information easily and we should also keep it in mind that it is not wise to make conclusion instantly after you read a news or hear something.In other words, we need to learn to distinguish whether what we have seen and heard is true. Living in such a information world, we are crowded with a large quantity of information and it can be quiet easy for us to make a conclusion after we read one piece of news if we don t think it carefully.But we need to know that what we are seeing or hearing may not the truth.Maybe it is just a gossip or other s opionions rather than the truth.It is very common in our daily life that we misunderstand others just because we make a conclusion before we have a clear conciousness of the details of the thing.In short,our eyes and ears may get the false information sometimes so it is really unwise to come to a conclusion deretly. From what I have talked above, I can safely draw this conclusion that you should never make a conclusion about one thing before you make a search on it and know the truth.
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