2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I want to take my foreign friend lucy to see the most interstingplace is Beijing.Beijing is the captical of china ,where is most beautiful in the world.And there have many places to visit,also many foods can eat.Follow me ,I will take you to see it. The first place is The grate wall,many people said,who do not go the grate wall is not a hero.many foreigners would like to go beijing and climb the grate wall.So this a grate place to visit. The second place is the tiananmen squere,where is very well and grand,and if you understand chinese history,you will know it is very important for us. this is the interstingplace that i want to take my friend lucy to visit.Best wishes for her.