语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者能较准确地使用高级词汇,不过存在个别拼写错误。
Dialects, considered as one of most significant aspects of one specific culture, is now being over discussed by many individuals or groups all over the world. what has been mentioned many times is that the use of dialects, and the statement for this topic is that dialects are as acceptable as any other language in use nowadays. There are two groups of people who hold different views on this discussion, one is that using dialects to join any conversation in different contexts is acceptable, the other, however, againsts the use of dialects in public. obviously, my opinion stands for the view of using dialects in public. To explain the first reason is that dialects are possesation left by our history in terms of their unique features, such as, special accent and pronounciation.