注意:
1、词数100左右,发言稿的开头和结尾已经为你写好。
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3、参考词汇:
时事:current affairs
犯罪:to commit a crime
Dear friends,
Thanks.
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。
Dear friends, With the development of society, more and more middle school students like to surf the Internet. But how can we use it correctly? In my opinion, surfing the Internet can bring us both good effects and bad effects. As we know, we can get useful information that we need from it to help us study all kinds of subjects, and learn about current affairs both at home and abroad. In our spare time, we can also relax ourselves by enjoying music and movies. But on the other hand, some of us waste much of their time on the Internet. Some are even addicted to playing computer games. Schools and parents are worried about that if no measures are taken, things will be much worse, and some may commit a crime. Each coin has two sides. So we must make proper use of the Internet. Thanks.