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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71633
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。

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Ji'nan once in my impression is a very good place, four seasons.But in fact, in the University for more than a year of time, I saw the scene of the summer drought in Ji'nan.Ji'nan's summer is dry, often rain is very small, most of them are heave rain.However, last year's drought has led to the lack of spring water.As a person in the South I never worried about the problem of drought, but now there is a certain understanding of the drought.Water is not enough to make me think of the people of the equator, and let me know the importance of water for us. So I urge you to take care of the environment, protect water resources.

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