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DoDo, a lovely dog, is my favorite pet. it has a pair of big ears hanging on two sides along its head, with a big black nose, it is adept at sniffing various kinds of smelling, as a result, it's desirable food would be found by itself easily if we have forgotten putting it away. Moreover, it can also wake us up when we fail to be conscious of our over-sleeping in time. So interesting is it that our house is always filled with harmony and happiness, undoubtedly, it is one of my best friends.