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小学二年级英语作文:My pet

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:38浏览次数:1954
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描述下你的宠物.字数在50字以内。
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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DoDo, a lovely dog, is my favorite pet. it has a pair of big ears hanging on two sides along its head, with a big black nose, it is adept at sniffing various kinds of smelling, as a result, it's desirable food would be found by itself easily if we have forgotten putting it away. Moreover, it can also wake us up when we fail to be conscious of our over-sleeping in time. So interesting is it that our house is always filled with harmony and happiness, undoubtedly, it is one of my best friends.

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