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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
I had a dream of Alice yesterday. I was to take her Wonderland. Not only have the kind of but also flower this flower can speak the language. I see too how many animals at the top of sky to flying. I try to fly. Hower. I was defeated. Alice a set of Speciaion glad clothes gave up with me. I dress that as I soon as animals fly. I was very excited! Although. I was sky before the ground. I loud shout spake "SOS". Finally. I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
