2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

可增加文中从句的使用量；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

The environment is very important for us. Nowadays, the environment problem more and more attention by people. Global warming is one of the focuses of environment problems. Global warming is the unusually rapid growth of average temperature of the earth's surface, in the past century is mainly due to the release of greenhouse gases people burning fossil fuels. Global warming of the earth's environment caused great influence, we should immediately stop global warming can't continue to wait, the issue of global warming will cause huge impact to our living environment, we should start from oneself, start from now, strengthen the consciousness of environmental protection, called on people to protect the environment around, contribute to environmental protection.