拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Nowadays, we may meet some people who need help sometimes. However, should we expect a reward when helping them? And then, this question evokes a hot debate and people take different opinions toward it. For one hand, some of them agree that we should get something as a reward when doing a good deed considering we have consumed time and energy in it. Thus, it is a way to help both of them feel comfort and release. And what's more, it helps them strengthen the relationship between them. For another hand, some of them against it because they think it is improper for us to expect a reward and we should act like the example of Lei Feng. In my opinion, I think we should not expect a reward when doing a good deed. It will help us build up a harmonious and friendly social environment and everyone is willing to help each other. Only in this way can we have a more bright and meaningful future.