小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I raise a dog named "doudou" at home.It has black ,long wavy and lustrous hair,and it feels soft.A pair of small eyes is sheltered by its hair, it looks very lovely ,and I sometimes doubt if it could see something.It always swings his short tail to welcome he home when I am back home afterschol.I feed it and play with it everyday.Now it becomes my faithful friend,so I am really happy to live with it.