高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown It is a very simple but full of human touch place, where I was born and grew up. Yes, That is my hometown. Years ago, people lived on planting and there were few height buildings in the village. There was a school in the middle of several villages, where all the children walked to school without parents. Maybe people were poor at that time, but they are very happy. Now, my hometown is changed a lot, it is now built like a park with beautiful views. Almost every family has lived in buildings with two or three layers. People become more and more rich, and the children are go to the center city for school. I am very happy that my hometown becomes more and more beautiful not worse. I hope it will be much better in the future.