高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

In the past, my hometown was a beautiful place. Many trees were planted in and around the city, you could see nothing but green if you looked through the city. There was clean water in the rivers with different kinds of fishes swimmed in it. Houses were low and streets were narrow. My hometown changed a lot recently. Tall buildings are everywhere. More and more factories and stores are opened in the city. There are countless cars driving on the road. Industry develops fast while environment turns really bad. Trees are decreased and fished vanish. Pollution resolving becomes a major matter for all the people in this city.