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My classmate Kitty is my classmate.She has big eyes,and round face.She is the tallest in my class. Kitty is generous with friends.She like to share everything with us.And she always hlpe others when they are in trouble. She is very humor.she always makes us happy. She can keep our things herself.So she is a true friend.