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【题目要求】
It's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents，agree or disagree ?
【题目讲解】
学校学习的好处，是不是就是老师的功能?上过课的翻翻笔记吧亲爱的们~传道授业解惑，老师的优势专业训练，互动教学过程。然而家长教育，1.家庭环境更轻松，家长可能更耐心，2.家长可以言传身教对不对~但是!有缺陷吗?1.家长可能教育比较随性，没有方法，小孩子接受起来不一定好，效率不高。2.而且家长的知识有限对不?3.家里的设备也有限。不像学校多媒体呀，同学互相帮助呀，图书馆呀等等。
能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇，同时要避免个别拼写错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
It can no be doubted that, recently, the issue of students live at school is more beneficial than stay at home. With the development of society, There is an increasing number of parents realizing the importance of education. At the same time, people believe that a comfortable atmosphere is essential. From my perspective, I totally agree with the view that living at school doemitory provides students more than at home. At first, I would like to list some benefits of joining in dorm life such as expanding the circle of mates, cultivating the ability of self-control and using more facilities to study. As we all know, the meaning of going to the college is to strengthen student's skills to live at the society. I suppose that youths can get more experience than stay at home through dorm room, for an example, how to solve problems of relationships between mates. After the discusson of these bright sides of school's life, I also want to discuss some forwards and drawbacks of living with parents. The first point is about parenting, this is can not be disputed that parents are the first role models of their kids in many aspects, however, many people don't play the role well and some young people get the wrong perspctives. Likewise, ordinary families can not offer the same advanced machines in the universities like libraries, labs and playground. It's not convinent forstudents to enjoy. As a conclusion, I have to focus my view again that I support to live at school is better than live at home in terms of these reasons above.
