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Sunday Last sundy,I went to the mall with my mother. At first,we saw a lot of flowers,the flowers are so beautiful that we took many photos. Then,we went to the restrant.We had a great lunch.The food was delicious enough to eat. We are so happy on last sunny.I hope to go there again one day!
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