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Sunday Last sunday, I went to the mall with my mother. Frist, we saw a lot of flowers, the flowers are so beautiful that we took many photos. Then, we went to therestaurant. We had a great lunch. The food was delicious enough to eat. We are so happy on last sunday. I hope to go there again one day!
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