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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦162:Sunday

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:04浏览次数:1233
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根据所给词语,写出语法正确,意思连贯且不少于五句话的短文。 
sunny, last Sunday, the students of Grade One... 

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文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming

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