内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;作者词汇量偏小,本文拼写错误较多
Dear KPOHsales, during produces showing helding in new yours I had leared about 5670 prudece of your canpany on 15th of 12,and we are interested in your goods .in spite of wanting to your company seed us a price list and intruction.thanks for your jion in,hoping establish business relationshio. hubin