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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6320
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分高级词汇,单词拼写也要仔细。

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Turst is a foudamental factor among people which is quite important.Only when we trust each other can we become very good friends and live more easily and happily.So it is really very necessary for us to maintain trust among people. Why we need to maintain trust?Here are the reasons in my mind.Firstly,maintaining trust can cut down the quarels between people.For example,if the couples don t trust each other,they may always doublt the loyalty and they may quarel a lot and finally their marriage will not last for a long time.Secondly,trust can make our life more easy and warm.Why some strangers can finally become friends for life ?I think it s mainly they trust each other.They believe they can sacrifice a lot for each other and when one of them are in troubel,another will give his help without hesitation.So turst really make a big difference in humans' relationship.But we should also keep it in mind we should not trust everyone because there are still some liars in the society and this requires us to learn to distinguish the people from the bad and the good. In short,by maintaining trust can our relationship between friends and families be improved and our life become more colorful.

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