小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friends,she is pretty girl,she has a curly brown hair and dark eyes,she's got a lovely figure,she like learning English and climbing mountain,she's from China,her hometown is a very beatuiful,and she graduated shenzhen University,she's working in guangdong,she is accurate and learn quickly,and she always help me,i like her.