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江苏省张家港市2011届九年级上学期期末试卷写作:亲情问题演讲稿

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:52浏览次数:1978[网页划词已开启]
要求:

假设你正在参加江苏省中学生英语演讲比赛,请针对有些父母亲经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。


演讲稿的主要内容应包括:

认为同学们不必为此烦恼,,希望能够体谅父母的苦衷。

建议以谈话、写信等方式与父母交流和沟通。


注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。


Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.
Some of us are having problems with our parents,as they often look into our school bags
or read our diaries.____________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

Most students feel uncomfortable, and even angry with their parents. For them, this behavior is a invasion of privacy, even though they are your parents. However, I hope all these students don't worry about it and try to be more considerable from your parents' perspective. I'm sure you know the reason why they do it. They just want to learn more about thier kids, while nowadays students in junior school don't want show their lives or hearts to their parents. There are quite a lot of ways to sovle these problems. The most simple one is to talk to them. You can tell your parents that they shouldn't read your diaries, and you also can share your daily life with them. Then they don't need to know you form your diaries. Maybe you are not good at talking such sensitive topics face to face. Then writing to your parents is also a good idea. I believe you can find a good solution to communicate with your parents.

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