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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9038
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

The impact of internet on learning As the rapid development of internet technology ,it is possible for everyone to access the internet.Therefore,many youngsters are likely to learn on the internet which can provide them with a lot of information. However,every coin has two sides. There are advantages and disadvantages about learning on internet. On one hand, it is very convenient for students to learn from the internet. What someone needs is only a computer and an available net wire.He may study whenever he wants and meanwhile he can choose what he needs or interests to learn since the internet provides him with all kinds of information. On the other hand, there is so much information on the internet,some of which may mislead teenagers who are lack of necessary guidance and supervision. At the same time ,young students are easy to trust strangers and make friends with bad people through internet,which is dangerous.What’s more, education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information.We should learn how to communicate with others and respect each other through education. Above all , only by education can we learn how to perfect ourselves.

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