小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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My hoilday Yesterday was the Ching Ming Festial.We went shopping with friends in near our neighhorhood in the morning .We bought a number of fruit and snacks. In the afternoon,we watch TV together.We were very happy .My mother come from copany when we watching TV.She took a number of peanatas.It's my favorite food. In the everning . We friends left.we say :"goodbey" together. Yesterday is general,but I was very happy.