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water is the soure of life ,we can't leave the water ,we rely on water to survice,no water and no life. i think the water disappeared that day is the end of the world. with the development of society people's standed of living rise. in this process,we have paid a high price.the destruction of the environment, no waste of resources exhausted and so on. the water is on our side ,but people seldom pay attention to it, perhaps it is very common, but they are each of us every day plays an important role, it keep us healthy, keep us alive. as we can see, we all waste water. large factories pollute the water, destroy the ecological environment, caused many environmental people pollution. in every place of the earth,there are people suffering from serious enviromental pollution, water pollution health harm. in the face of these we must take measures to protect water sources, water conservation, we must enhance the awarness of water conservation, do not litter, to actively report polluting factories, the government should streng then spervision. this requives our common efforts, wich relates to the future of mankind, to live in harmony with nature,the socalled with repay.
