文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和复合句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。
Deer David: I were so excited to hear that you are coming to here to learning Chinese from your e-mail yesterday. And I do think that you said you are determined to heighten language skills by communicating with me or other amiable classmates is excellently perfect idea, practically. In my opinion, reading more and more simple stories of Chinese books is a effective method of improving your vocabulary. As a whole, You can not be good at Chinese overnight, and it will take you a long time to make success, but indeed deserved. It is my pleasure to help you to learning language. Finally,welcome to China, I am waiting for you. your best friend: Chenquan