文章词汇使用比较恰当,高级词汇积累不足;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Deer David: I am so exciting to hear that you are coming to here to learning Chinese from your yesterday e-mail. And I do think that you said you are determined to heighten language skills by communicating with me or other amiable classmates is excellently perfect idea, practically. In my opinion, reading more and more simple stories of Chinese books is an effective method of improving your vocabulary. As a whole, You can not be good at Chinese overnight, and it will take you a long time to make success, but indeed deserved. It is my pleasure to help you to learning language. Finally, welcome to China, I am waiting for you. Best wishes, Sincerely yours: Chen quan