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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

From the given table, it's obvious that the number of people traveling has grown rapidly in recent ten years.More and more people choose to go on a trip on vacations. It indicates that the financial conditions of people in this cities became much better than before.Instead of hunting for food and surviving the cold, people are paying more attention to their life qualities. And they would ask more about how to enjoy life.As far as i am concerned the main motion of this trend is the dramatic economic growth of our country which made huge changes of people's life .So people tried to find pleasure and add some other colors to their life pictures. Traveling is a good experience .For us,it can broaden our minds and we can learn different cultures from it .For the country , traveling field is an invisible hand which can help a country to develop and increase the economy.

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