文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
It's convient to use disposal bags.People are zccustomed to going shopping,meanwhile,they always bring some cheap and tough disposal bags from the market.So,you can see disposal bags in everywhere. Disposal bags are acknowledged as a polution in the everiment.On account of the disposal bags can't be deleted totally.Everyday,people use four to eight disposal bags in average.Therefore,how to deal with so many accumulated bags is a essential problem. The goverment had deliver a plan which is limiting the use of disposal bags.According to the goverment's action.In my opinion,it aimed what is that making our planet more green and beautiful.