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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear David Smith hello,David ,I'm the sell-asistant in our enterprise.My name is WangQang.I am going to appreciate for ordering 100 boxes of T-Shirt.Hoping you have a great experience of this purchasing,here is some advice for you.First of all,using the carton to pack the goods rather than the wooden box,which would be more convenient and functional.As we all know,the carton ,made up of paper,is much lighter than the wooden one,What's more,it's too soft to damage the goods.By the way,it works great when our company use the cartons in the recent trades with other American company.Hoping to receive you response later ,thanks for witching it! Have a good time!
