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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17597[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分64.5分
评语:

文章高级词汇使用熟练,但请作者增加词汇丰富度;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

At a temperature not higher than 60 DEG C hot water as the heat medium, buried under ground following filling layer in the heating pipe of the circulation flow in, heating the whole floor, through the ground to radiation and convection heat transfer mode to the indoor heating of a heating means. With a temperature not higher than 60 degrees Celsius hot water as the heat medium, in the buried in the ground below the filling layer of the heating pipe circulation flow, heating the whole. A heating method for indoor heating by the heat transfer of radiation and convection. With a temperature not higher than 60 degrees Celsius hot water as the heat medium, in the buried in the ground below the filling layer of the heating pipe circulation flow, heating the whole A heating method for indoor heating by the heat transfer of radiation and convection.

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