小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend who named Lisa.She has big brown eyes and long black hair.The first time I met her was in her classroom,she came and said hello to me.We have talked a lot since that time and become good friend.She has a nuclear family,but she want to have a sister.Her dream is going to be a doctor,I hope it will come true.I love my best friend Lily.