2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

As a prevalent saying goes,"success is important,but the way to success is more important“，which，as a matter of fact,it conveys a simple but ironic meaning that the right way is better to get access to success. There are several factors accounting for this saying.First and foremost,keeping a positive antitude is of great importance,only own it,can we have more courage to face the difficulty.What’s more，try our biggest efforts to success.There is a saying said that the more work hard, the more lucky.Therefore,we are supposed to try our best.Most important of all,possessing a healthy body is fundamantal.If we have a good body,we can do more and better. Above all,we cannot emphasis the important of the way to success,only in this way,can we get better.