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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;多多加强从句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇量偏小,且拼写错误较多。
my name is LIming,am a boy.Now i not manrriy,and was grduteing beng fang uiversity in the 2008 years.Of coures,what I leared is Enlish.my stdutying was very good in during school. I am good at speaking and heareding .German language is speaking a second language.I only speak some iimple world .i like palying basketball and movieGerman language is speaking a second language