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作者在句法层面做的很棒；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
As the urban population growth and industrial development, the vehicle has soared, a substantial increase in pollutant discharge and suspended solids, a direct result of the deterioration of air quality, the haze weather began to appear, now in our country many appeared haze weather, the harm is very much, a serious impact on the people's health. It not only hurt our internal organs will also cause some social problems, such as traffic visibility variable low prone to car rear end collision, affect the normal traffic order. Visible haze impact on our lives, we should work together to carry out low-carbon action.
