2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

With the development of urban population growth and industrial vehicles has soared, a substantial increase in emissions of pollutants and suspended solids, a direct result of deterioration of air quality, weather haze began to appear, now in our country there has been a lot of fog and haze, very harm seriously, seriously affecting people's health. It not only hurts our internal organs can also cause a number of social problems, such as traffic and low visibility variables easily lead to rear of the car crash, affecting the normal traffic order. Visible haze affect our lives, we should carry out low-carbon action together.