语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
At the top of the list, there are two kinds of price in the household hotel here, the single room costs 30 yuan, while the other is at the price of 20 yuan each person every day. Moreover, everyone has meal here will also cost 20 yuan each day. you can have lunch with the host's families, undoubtedly, you can order the dishes you like in the menu as well as cook by yourself. Last but not least, the price of bathing in the sea, swimming over there or climbing the mountains here can be also cheaper than you think about, if you can do the work in the greenhouse without getting payment, virtually should be your volunteer, it's admitted as well. It's a valuable opportunity for you, not only will you know more about China, but feel the atmosphere of the family here.