小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句偏多了；文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

my best friend name is Susan.She has a long and black hair.her eyes are bule.She come from American.She is able to speak Chinese very well.She likes puppy than cat.She likes to watch TV.She is the most beautiful girl that i have ever seem.She is very kind of me.She has a litter sister.She.s father is a doctor and mother is a nurse. There.s house is very far from our school. She spend 40 minuts to go to school.