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2005年12月英语六级作文真题:Declining a job offer

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:30浏览次数:1166
要求:
Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1.对公司提供职位表示感谢 
2.解释为何不能接受所提供职位的原因 
3.希望予以谅解,并表达对公司的良好祝愿. 
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

To begin with, I am really appreciated that you decline a job offer to me. However, I can't accept the position you apply for me and there are some reasons following. For one hand, I think the position not suit for me because I am not good at communicating with other people as a salesperson. As far as I am concerned, my specialty is design and I prefer to be a designer rather than a salesperson which will make good use of what I have learnt from my college. For another hand, the salary that you can afford may be lower than other companies. Thus, I can't live a normal life in this city with it because of the high level of consumption. So, I feel very sorry about that I can't be a part of employees of your company. Meanwhile, I hope I can be forgiven. Wish your company can make great progress in the future and have a more bright and successful prospect.

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