作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
To begin with, I am really appreciated that you decline a job offer to me. However, I can't accept the position you apply for me and there are some reasons following. For one hand, I think the position not suit for me because I am not good at communicating with other people as a salesperson. As far as I am concerned, my specialty is design and I prefer to be a designer rather than a salesperson which will make good use of what I have learnt from my college. For another hand, the salary that you can afford may be lower than other companies. Thus, I can't live a normal life in this city with it because of the high level of consumption. So, I feel very sorry about that I can't be a part of employees of your company. Meanwhile, I hope I can be forgiven. Wish your company can make great progress in the future and have a more bright and successful prospect.