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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12893
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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According to this picture. We can learn that there are more and more people interested in internet. They use the computer with playing games, working, communicating and so on. Some of them even foget to eat as Andy of this picture. Therefore, The parents sometimes lack of the opportunites to communicate with their kids by face-to-face which makes them feel lonely. Because through face-to-face communication, we can see the eyes and expressions on faces of each other to increasing the emotion. In the duration of face to face communication, Hugging and shaking hands and other body languages can also make people happy and faithful. In the internet, we can only use words or ecpression symbol to communicate. We can not know about others deeply. So electronic communication cannot replace face-to-face contact.

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