一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

On sunday ,it may be free to most of the children ,as they don't need to go to school,and they could enjoy their leisure time doing anything they want.But for me ,it could be a busy day.In the morning, I usually get up early and then help my mother do some housework.After that ,I am going to do some physical exercise with my father in the park which is near to my home.After lunch, I sometimes to go shoping with my mother,I sometimes watch television,and sometimes I go for a walk with my classmates. Oh ,what a happy day I have spent!