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小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:44浏览次数:2142
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用英语描述下自己的一次旅游,字数在100字以内.
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衔接成分偏少;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇表达不够丰富,也请检查文章的单词拼写。

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A trip Zhejing, it is the city which is i know in china. The weather is pleasant. I enjoyed spending my vacation in here. I went to zhejing in this summer vacation. I went to beach,zoo,aquarium and west lake in Hangzhou with my family. one of the famous lake is west lake in hangzhou.I like it very much . There are lots of willow on lakeside. There are same swans on the lake. The sky is bule.The lake is green. In addition, there are many snacks in west lake in Hangzhou.The best food that i have eat is the barbecue of the west lake.I was happy for this trip.

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