GRE写作Issue模拟题8:Pursuing One's Ideals

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Pick Up the Phone– Stop hiding behind your computer. Business gets done on the phone and in person. It should be your first instinct, not last, to talk to a real person and source business opportunities. And when the Internet goes down… stop looking so befuddled and don't ask to go home. Don't be a pansy, pick up the phone. You HAVE to Build Your Technical Chops – Adding “Proficient in Microsoft Office” at the bottom of your resume under Skills, is not going to cut it anymore. I immediately give preference to candidates who are ninjas in: Photoshop, HTML/CSS, iOS, WordPress, Adwords, MySQL, Balsamiq, advanced Excel, Final Cut Pro – regardless of their job position. If you plan to stay gainfully employed, you better complement that humanities degree with some applicable technical chops. You're Talented, But Talent is Overrated - Congratulations, you may be the most capable, creative, knowledgeable