小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

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A trip Zhejing, it is the city which I know in China. The weather is pleasant. I enjoyed spending my vacation in here. I went to Zhejing in this summer vacation. I went to the beach, zoo, aquarium and west lake in Hangzhou with my family. One of the famous lakes is west lake in hangzhou. I like it very much. There are lots of willow on lakeside. There are the some swans on the lake. The sky is bule.The lake is green. In addition, there are many snacks in west lake in Hangzhou.The best food that i have eat is the barbecue of the west lake.I was happy for this trip.