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Nowadays, there exist a phenomenon that is most parents will do everything for their children, such as washing clothes, cooking and cleaning the room, which makes many children can not look after themselves in their life. Therefore, how should parents help children to be independent is a paradoxical opinion. On the one hand, most people who accept the questionnaire survey express that they do not like be limited by their parents, in particular, something they do in their free time. They hope that parents should believe that they can do it well, and they will ask for them when they have some matters. On the other hand, the rest people enjoy their parents' control. Because they think it is a good thing that they do not to do anything but can have food to eat, have clothes to dress and have enough money to cost. Their parents treats them as a king or a prince, they feel quite easy and comfortable. However, as far as i am concerned, i support the first idea. To be honest, i hate to be limited by others, which the feeling is so terrible. Freedom is my love.
