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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36997[网页划词已开启]
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

Tomb-sweeping Day is one of the twenty-four solar terms, usually located about April 4th and 6th. People have celebrated Tomb-sweeping Day since Eastern Zhou desteney, which have almost 2500 years history until now. After Tomb-sweeping Day, temperature rise gradually, ranfall will be increase, which is the trace that it’s the important time for farmer to arrange their farm work. At the same time, Tomb-sweeping Day is a good time to go hiking, people outing and having a lots of entertainment and activity. The most important thing is Tomb-sweeping Day is a big day to memerize ancient and relatives who pass away.

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